原来云也可以离我这么近，才朝安徽法治资讯也可以和我作伴，以前却只道这云，高高在上不可攀
It'sspring.It'ssunnyandcloudytoday.Therearemanybigtreesinthepark.Mr.Black'sfamilyhaveapicnicinapark.Theybringmanyfoodthere.Theybringfruit,drinkandbread.Mr.BlackandMrs.Blacktalkwitheachother.Theytalkveryhappily.Annreadsamagazine.Tomlikesflyingakite.Thekitefliesverywell.Theyarehungrynow.Theywanttoeattheirfood.Theyareveryhappy.中学生写作指导、顶流写作素材、顶流优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号焦点Thisweekend,Ihadalotoffun.Igotupatsevenfifteen.Ibrushedmyteethandhadsomebreakfast.Then,Iwenttotheparkwithmygoodfriends.Wehadapicnicthere.Webroughtsomeapples,somemangoes,somesandwichesandsomejuice安徽法治资讯.Theapplesandthemangoesweresweet.Thesandwichesweredelicious.Thejuicewasnice.Afterlunch,webeganplayinggames.Wealsoplayedtabletennis.Weallhapply.Ihadagoodweekend,whataboutyou?批改后：Ihadalotoffunthisweekend.Igotupatsevenfifteen.Ibrushedmyteethandhadsomefoodforbreakfast.Then,Iwenttotheparkwithmygoodfriends.Wehadapicnicthere.Webroughtsomeapples,somemangoes,somesandwichesandsomejuice.Theapplesandthemangoesweresweet.Thesandwichesweredelicious.Thejuicewasnice.Afterlunch,webeganplayinggames.Wealsoplayedtabletennis.Wewereallhappy.Ihadagoodweekend,whataboutyou?批改老师：Andy老师六年级:贾雯馨作文网专稿未经允许不得转载
Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandma,grandpa,dad,momandI.Look!GrandmaiswatchingTV.Grandpaisreadingabook.Dadiswritingane-mail.Momiscookingdinner.Iamdoingmyhomework.Ilovemyfamily!中学生写作指导、才朝写作素材、才朝优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号Theskyisblue.Birdsareflyingfreelyinthesky.Theriverisclean.Manyfishareswimmingintheriver.Iamsoexcited,becauseIcangotothezoo!Inthezoo,Icanseemanyanimals.Therearelions,elephants,rabbits,tigers,pandas,sheepandsoon.Look!Thelionsarerunning.Theyaresofierce.Theelephantsaredrinkingwater.Therabbitsareeatingcarrots.Theyarereallycute!Thetigersarewalking.Thepandasareeatingbamboos.Thesheepareeatinggrasses.Thebearsaresleeping.Oh,whatalazybear!Myfatherssittingonabenchreadinganewspaper.Motheristakingaphotooftheanimals.Mygrandfatheriseatinglunchwithmygrandmother.Myfriendsareplayingonthelawn.Howniceadayitis!中学生写作指导、顶流写作素材、顶流优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号Iamagirloften,andIliveinasmallmountainvillagefarfromTaiyuan.Theonlypersonthatliveswithmeismymo安徽法治资讯ther,becausemyfatherisawayforeightyears,workinginacity.DuringtheSpringFestival,myfathercamebackhome.Helookedthinandtired.Hegavemymothertwothousandyuan,andtoldherthathewouldworkevenharder,earnmoremoney,andthenhecouldtakeustothecityHestayedathomeforonlytendays.Wearelivingapoorlifenow.ButwhatIwantmostisnotmoney,butmyfather.Imisshimverymuch!中学生写作指导、焦点写作素材、焦点优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号
WinterisverycoldandwindyinmostpartsofChina.IusuallylookforwardtotheSpringFestivalandthewinterholidaywhenIcangotothesouthwheretheclimateiswarmerduringtheseholidays.Also,Ilookforwardtoseeingmygrandparentsandmyfriends.Winteristhetimeeveryoneisinafestivemood.Inthecity,Iusuallydoalotofreadingathomeinthewinterbecauseofehcoldweatheroutside.中学生写作指导、才朝写作素材、才朝优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号Ilikespring.Itswarmandwindyinspring.Therearebeautifulflowerseverywhere.Ioftengoonapicnicwithmyfamily.AndIcanplanttreesandflyakite,too.Ilikesummer.Itshotandsunnyinsummer.Ialwaysgoswimmingwithmybrother.Icaneaticecream.AndIcanhaveasummervacation,too.Ilikeautumn.Theweatheriscoolandthecolorsarepretty.Ioftenpickapplesandgohikinginautunm.Ilikewinter.Itsverycoldandwindy,sometimesitsfoggy.ButIlikewinterbest,becauseitswhiteeverywhere.Iusuallyplayinthesnowandmakeasnowman.Icanhaveawintervacationtoo.中学生写作指导、顶流写作素材、顶流优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号
Ihaveagoodfriend.Sheisabeautifulgirl.Shehaslongblackhair,twobigblackeyesandaredmouth.Hervoiceisbetter.Sheisgoodatsinging.Sheisaclevergirl.Shelikesreadingbooks,playingcomputergamesandchess.Sheisalsonice.Sheoftenhelpsus.Ourclassmateslikeherverymuch.中学生写作指导、焦点写作素材、焦点优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号
Itisundeniablethattheworseningenvironmenthasbecomethebiggestconcernofthepresent-dayworld.Landresourcesaredwindlingbecauseofwaterlossandsoilerosion.Wastegasespoisontheairwebreathe.Theriversandlakesarepollutedbywastedumpedinthemfromfactories.Itisprobablynoexaggerationtosaythatdeteriorationofthequalityoftheenvironmentthreatenstheexistenceofmankinditself.Somepeopleareoftheopinionthattheenvironmentalproblemisthepricewehavetopayforeconomicdevelopment.ButIdonotthinkthatthisargumentisvalid.Afterall,whatisthepointofeconomicgrowthifpeople'slivesareadverselyalfectedbyworseningenvironmentalpollution?中学生写作指导、才朝写作素材、才朝优秀作文以及有奖活动尽在作文网微信公众号家，顶流时而安静，时而也会有一些的磕磕碰碰，还要每日里弥漫着柴米油盐的烟火味，家的味，平凡且琐碎。
新家，焦点安在珠江新城这边，焦点租的，地方不大，许多设备都没有，这可难为了我家柴火夫，一样样的为我买来，最主要的是这中药不能停，而且要用明火煲，这得买煤气和煤气炉，还有许多日常用品，电脑得拉网线等等，新的地方，总是有诸多的不习惯，连开个电视我也弄半天打不开，真笨的女人。想来想去，才朝终是不舍这个虽小却温暖温情容我悲喜苦乐的小窝，那个四季有花开的天台园子。
房子是旧房子，顶流前几年搬进来时由于经济不好只草草地番新了一下，现在五六年过去，墙壁的灰东掉一块，西掉一块，今天掉一块，明天掉一块。她打来电话时，焦点正值我和老公在收拾屋子，把所有东西打包，安放好，该留的留，该扔的扔，清空屋子准备重新粉刷装修一番。
